Josh Matheson - Week 9; First AP Lang Essay

Why Failing a Paper Was the Best Thing I Did in College

Last week, we had our first in class timed essay and let's just say it did not go according to plan.  Going into the first essay, I was focused on completing the essay within the 40 minutes and have a great thesis, that can be backed up with enough evidence.  The essay was both a success and a fail, as I finished in time which was one of my concerns, but I did not get specific enough and tie enough evidence back to my thesis.  I realized that even though I had the evidence the most important thing to explain is why the speaker uses that choice.  This generally is what destroyed me because I had the evidence, but did not get specific enough and just left everything vague.  Fortunately,  I am confident that next time will be better,  since this is my first AP essay and the best way to improve is through practice and experiences.  On this essay, I received a 2.5, which is not too good of a score, but at least I will have the revision in order to fix my dumb mistakes that I made under pressure while I was rushing during the short 40 minute class period.  I do think that I was graded generously, and I am sure that future essays will be graded more harshly, However, I think I will get the hang of it and improve my essay performances in the future.  With the early failures, changes and adjustments need to be made, in order for future success.  

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  1. AnonymousNovember 17, 2023 at 9:16 AM

    Writing under timed circumstances is incredibly difficult and its no wonder you made dumb mistakes because everyone did. Being put under the pressure of a timer makes it much harder to write effectively. I can't wait for the revision because I'm sure my grade will go way up.

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